討論:第二份英文作業/2018.02.21-2018.06.22/盧星瑜:修訂版本之間的差異

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2018.04.02
 
(未顯示同用戶所作出之13次版本)
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===2018.04.09===
 
===2018.04.09===
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*通過,念句子的流暢度有進步,再多練習會更好喔!
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===2018.04.16===
 
===2018.04.16===
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*通過
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===2018.04.23===
 
===2018.04.23===
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*通過,聲音需要再大聲一點。
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===2018.04.30===
 
===2018.04.30===
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*5/1(二)檢查通過。
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===2018.05.07===
 
===2018.05.07===
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*tongue 舌,舌頭發音要注意,通過。
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===2018.05.14===
 
===2018.05.14===
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*句子念得較不流暢,exit,departure,electronic,fastened 單字發音要特別注意。
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===2018.05.21===
 
===2018.05.21===
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*We've all heard the recommendation to drink eight glasses of water per day. And while the science is still out on exactly how much water you should drink each day, there's no doubt that hydration is essential.我們都聽過每天要喝八杯水的建議。而雖然科學還沒有說清楚到底每天應該要喝多少水,但無庸置疑地,補水是很必要的。
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*Known as water intoxication, or water poisoning, it occurs when you drink more water than your body is able to handle. Your blood contains a certain level of sodium that your kidneys regulate. If that level drops too low, say by drinking more water than your kidneys are able to process at once, then your blood becomes diluted and watery, a condition known as hyponatremia. That excess water in your blood is carried around your body where it enters your cells, causing them to swell up like balloons. Now, most of the cells in your body are able to handle putting on a little extra size, but there's one place where you definitely don't want that to happen—the brain. Your brain sits snugly inside the skull, which means it has no room to expand. As your brain swells and the pressure in the skull increases, blood flow is decreased, depriving your brain of oxygen.以 water intoxication(水中毒),或是 water poisoning 為人所熟知,當你喝下超過你身體負荷量的水,就會發生水中毒。你的血液含有由腎臟調節的特定含量的鈉。如果那個量變得太少,假設因為喝了超過腎臟可以立即處理的水量,那你的血液就會變得稀稀水水的,這是一個被稱為低鈉血的症狀。你血液裡那些過量的水分會被帶到你身體裡的各個地方,進入你的細胞中,使它們像氣球一樣膨脹。你身體裡大部分的細胞都還可以應付多增加幾個尺碼,但有一個你絕對不會想讓這種事發生的地方--大腦。你的大腦剛剛好塞進你的頭蓋骨裡,那表示它沒有可以膨脹的空間。當你的大腦膨脹,且頭蓋骨裡的壓力上升時,血流下降,讓你的大腦缺氧。
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*以上兩大段句子不夠流暢,單字不大會念,需要再多練習。通過。
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===2018.05.28===
 
===2018.05.28===
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*通過
 
===2018.06.04===
 
===2018.06.04===
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*earlier 發音要注意,通過
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===2018.06.11===
 
===2018.06.11===
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*通過
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===2018.06.18===
 
===2018.06.18===
===2018.06.20===
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*通過
===2018.06.27===
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===2018.06.25===
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*通過

2018年6月25日 (一) 09:44的最新修訂版本

2018.02.26

  • 通過,單字不大熟悉。

2018.03.05

  • 請假,上海境外學習。
  • 3/20 檢查通過。

2018.03.12

  • 通過,句子要再熟悉一些。

2018.03.19

  • 通過,句子要再熟悉一些。

2018.03.26

  • 3/27(二)檢查有做,需再找老師檢核。
  • 3/29(四)檢查通過。

2018.04.02

  • 內容單字句子不大熟,通過

2018.04.09

  • 通過,念句子的流暢度有進步,再多練習會更好喔!

2018.04.16

  • 通過

2018.04.23

  • 通過,聲音需要再大聲一點。

2018.04.30

  • 5/1(二)檢查通過。

2018.05.07

  • tongue 舌,舌頭發音要注意,通過。

2018.05.14

  • 句子念得較不流暢,exit,departure,electronic,fastened 單字發音要特別注意。

2018.05.21

  • We've all heard the recommendation to drink eight glasses of water per day. And while the science is still out on exactly how much water you should drink each day, there's no doubt that hydration is essential.我們都聽過每天要喝八杯水的建議。而雖然科學還沒有說清楚到底每天應該要喝多少水,但無庸置疑地,補水是很必要的。
  • Known as water intoxication, or water poisoning, it occurs when you drink more water than your body is able to handle. Your blood contains a certain level of sodium that your kidneys regulate. If that level drops too low, say by drinking more water than your kidneys are able to process at once, then your blood becomes diluted and watery, a condition known as hyponatremia. That excess water in your blood is carried around your body where it enters your cells, causing them to swell up like balloons. Now, most of the cells in your body are able to handle putting on a little extra size, but there's one place where you definitely don't want that to happen—the brain. Your brain sits snugly inside the skull, which means it has no room to expand. As your brain swells and the pressure in the skull increases, blood flow is decreased, depriving your brain of oxygen.以 water intoxication(水中毒),或是 water poisoning 為人所熟知,當你喝下超過你身體負荷量的水,就會發生水中毒。你的血液含有由腎臟調節的特定含量的鈉。如果那個量變得太少,假設因為喝了超過腎臟可以立即處理的水量,那你的血液就會變得稀稀水水的,這是一個被稱為低鈉血的症狀。你血液裡那些過量的水分會被帶到你身體裡的各個地方,進入你的細胞中,使它們像氣球一樣膨脹。你身體裡大部分的細胞都還可以應付多增加幾個尺碼,但有一個你絕對不會想讓這種事發生的地方--大腦。你的大腦剛剛好塞進你的頭蓋骨裡,那表示它沒有可以膨脹的空間。當你的大腦膨脹,且頭蓋骨裡的壓力上升時,血流下降,讓你的大腦缺氧。
  • 以上兩大段句子不夠流暢,單字不大會念,需要再多練習。通過。

2018.05.28

  • 通過

2018.06.04

  • earlier 發音要注意,通過

2018.06.11

  • 通過

2018.06.18

  • 通過

2018.06.25

  • 通過